WIP Critique Mongol Warrior

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Andrew Craft

Andrew Craft

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Another bust started today from Pegaso. I got the face done and started work on the shirt. I have tried to push the shadows and highlights on the face, something I tend to under do.
All critique is welcome,
Thanks for looking.

Andrew.
 

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Very nice start Andrew.
For myself i find the face to dark for a Mongol. But it is possible that the picture don't do justice.
The shirt is great. Some more highlights on the highest folds, and that will end up with some amazing red.

marc
 
Face looks good as does the red shirt so far. Some extreme highlights would really bring this up as suggested already.
 
Great start Andrew.
A facial expression is fantastic.
I think the tone appropriate for the Mongolian.
I'd like to follow.

Mitsutaka.
 
Thanks very much for looking and the comments.
Today I tidied up the shirt and got the armour off to a start.
 

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Nearly there with this one. A bit more work to do on the leather on the helmet, some touch ups here and there and I think the cloth on the inside of the helmet is too white so I might have to redo that.
All comments and critique are welcome.
Thanks,
Andrew.
 

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