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lespauljames

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Hello figure painting friends,
its been a little while as I have had lots of aircraft to build but the urge for painting something figurey got the best of me..
As soon as the bench was clear from the last build (Mitsubishi type 96 Claude)

I hope you enjoy this (rather ambitious ) build log as it evolves. And please feel free to offer critique to your hearts content, I want to learn and improve

James

Ps.. For those who are interested here is the Claude...
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Thanks folks. Geoff, its a young minis bust
The flesh was based in a dark brown mix of dark vermillion, bright orange, light green and German c black brown.

I feel the eyes on this piece could have been a bit sharper, they were quite tricky to paint.
The eyes were green grey with ivory lights, iris was black and Prussian blue, with lightened Prussian blue lights. Pupil was black with a ivory catchlight


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Hi James

Glad you got the figurey urge again ........

Good choice I agree about the eyes could have been sharper but the flesh tones look good

Following this with interest

Nap

PS JAMES IS DEMONSTRATING HIS ARTWORK at BUGLE CALL on 25th November ...look forward to that
 
Thanks Nap, hope you are well! I'm looking forward to BC, will be an exiting show and just a tad nerve racking haha.
Do you have any tips regarding eyes? I usually paint the white/grey then outer iris inner iris and pupil and catch, then close it in, but always have trouble with one at least. It could be a practice thing or maybe I need a magnifier ( they seem to get in the way)
I may try later to repaint the eyes.
James
 
Looking good - looking forward to seeing more (y)
(I will probably pick up this bust for myself too!)
Phil
 
Thanks Nap, hope you are well! I'm looking forward to BC, will be an exiting show and just a tad nerve racking haha.
Do you have any tips regarding eyes? I usually paint the white/grey then outer iris inner iris and pupil and catch, then close it in, but always have trouble with one at least. It could be a practice thing or maybe I need a magnifier ( they seem to get in the way)
I may try later to repaint the eyes.
James
I do not know what medium you use, but I gues this method would work with any.
1) paint eyes off-white (i.e. white with a touch of skin colour in it for warm eyes, or a tiny touch of blue for cold eyes)
2) whadow the eyes using same white mis, but a little bit darkened - I pretend I am painting part of a sphere, so shadows at the bottom, light where it is sticking out
3) a dark shadow underneath the upper eyelid (I try to avoid painting on the eye ball at this point
4) a very thin line of red-coloured shadow on the inside of the lower eyelid (again attempting to avoid the eyeball. Another option (my last set of eyes was a bit of an accident, I will use this on purpose on the next set) is to thinly paint the eyeball with thinner (i.e. water for acrylics, surpentine for oils) - blow dry (but not bone dry - the purpose is to dry the bits that are sticking out while still having thinner inside the folds) then with a light touch with the reddish shadow at the inner corner of the eye (close to the nose)
4) for irisses/pupils, either mark the center of the iris with a dot or a very thin line (outer iris colour) - this step is very important, as it will locate each iris on the eye (so if making an error, whipe away and try again). Important to do both eyes at the same time. So a dot/line for both eyes, then increase the area on one eye with the outer iris colour a little; the same location+size on the other eye; then increase a bit more on the one eye, then the other and so forth until you are happy with the iris size.
5) Work in the inner iris colour - with this colour I also bring out the fomr of the eyeball, but inversing the light (so shadow tone on the upper half, lighter tone on the inner half - and increasingly lighter towards the centre.
6) When happy put in the pupil.

Only when face and eyes are completed, and I have a clear understanding of the mood i am trying to convey do I put in light reflection in the desired position. - so this is done either just before doing hair/hood/whatever or at the very end of completing the bust - the last touches as it were.

A lot of work, but I get really good remarks on my lat work (Darth Yoda, as it was seen on Oundle.
Once I get my camera working again I will attempt to take some close ups (starting my own topic, of course)

Hope this helps
 
Phil thankyou !
And Landrotten Highlander, thankyou that's an excellent reply. I tried to follow your instruction, and got to me, a much more pleasing eye.. It was easier for me to paint over the old eye than when I started the bust. Thankyou for your guidance !

So here are the improved eyes.. And more facial highlights. The lighting is poor and my phone takes poor photos, but I have a photo anyway.
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Also a quick note, I am finding the beard tricky to paint without it looking badly drybrushed. I'm considering using oils to blend blue/black, vandyke brown and white to achieve the "salt and pepper " look. Any thoughts on this ? James
 
Eyes looking good (y)

I recently noticed something re hair I never did before (I too used to drybrush and got nowhere).

In most periodartwork, the highlights on the hair resemble more "bands of light" across several strands, rather than highlighting the highest points along the strands.
I have seen examples of this on busts, and they always jump out much more compared to the normal box art (shame I cannae find the bl*****g things again).
 
I wrote out a post and it evaporated! Lol.
Thanks L.H!
Its always the way! Not being able to find things, I have lost loads to the ether.. Haha

I know what you mean, I employed something similar but very subtle on the head hair of my Rurik bust, its a nice challenge to get it too look natural and sheeny and not as in your face as the hair on a L'Oreal model.
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Guess who will be studying beards at work today
 
Hi James

Catching up on this ....no need to answer ref eyes after the excellent post by LH ...and it's great to see you using it and achieving the result .

As for hairbeards ..I don't drybrush rather than try to paint the textures treating strand individually gradually working up depth, shadows and highlights

This is already looking good so looking forward to more

Happy times

Nap
 
Thanks Nap ! That's what I'm going to do I think, I have left the beard for the moment so I can approach it with fresh eyes after completing another section. No pics yet but last night at club i had a chat with our other figure guy and got some feedback on the face, I added some small glazes of violet to the lower cheeks and lower eyelids, and worked a slightly strong shadow into the creases between cheeks and upper lip. Pics and updates soon !
J
 
Morning folks!
A quick question, I have googled this but I couldn't find anything really,
What dyes were available in the middle east in the 12 century? I know of indigo and red, I'm trying to work out what options I have .
Many thanks
James
 
James ,

Found this ..might help !!!

THE NEW COLOURS OF THE MIDDLE AGES

“With regard to the colour of things there is no lengthy discussion, since sight itself demonstrates how much Beauty it adds to nature, when this last is adorned by many different colours”, as Hugh of Saint Victor wrote in the 12th century.


The Gonzaga velvet is named after the house founded in 1328. Lily has been a symbol of royalty since the Middle Ages

But what is such a widespread of tones due to? To the discovery of blue and of the colours made from it, which endowed medieval clothes with a myriad of colours. This isn’t, though, simply related to the beauty Hugh spoke of, but rather to their symbolism.

Each colour had its own meaning: this comes as no surprise, in an age when every little thing in the universe was perceived as part of God’s work of art, and when an allegorical meaning could always be glimpsed. Colours included.

THE MEANING OF CLOTHING COLOURS

Let’s start with the oldest colours:

white: a symbol of pureness, innocence and compassion;

black: the colour farmers had to wear, together with gray, as Charlemagne ordered, represented mourning and repentance, but since the 14th century it became one of the aristocracy’s favourite colours;
red: the colour of kings, given that it stood for fire, and thus for power, victory and shelter from illnesses and evil spirits

But in the 12th century other colours turned up:

blue: from clothing to painting, blue was used more and more often and replaced red as royal colour; it thus developed into the most widely used colour in the 14th and 15th century. An icon of faithfulness and spirituality, it was employed in the images of the Virgin Mary, too, as well as being used by the lower classes to dye their own clothes, since the required plant was very common. Though, of course, their blue was not as deep as the aristocrats’;

yellow: it has a negative nuance all over Europe, where traitors, Hebrews and Muslims are yellow-dressed; just to eventually evolve into a representation of the balance of red and white, though;

purple: the colour reserved for European royal families, but extremely rarely seen, due to the fact that the technique to produce it got lost just in the Late Middle Ages

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You could also have a look at www.historicenterprises.com

A company that specialise in medieval repro

Here's some pics of colours using dyes available



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Nap
 
Hi LH

Indeed it is ..that link is interesting as well

I added some other site and pics to my last post

Looking at the ornate armour on the bust I would look at the more richer tones

Be interesting what James goes with

Nap
 
Thanks LH and Nap, there seems to have been a fairly universal dye lot used during that period, I also found on my web hunt an article about Persian carpets and the dyes used throughout. It all seems to marry up, its just a shame there seems to be very few solid references on fabrics from the middle east, and even colours as descriptor, I remebrr seeing a link posted here about what colours meant what in medieval times.
Here is the rug page, not exactly on the same page but a close parallel?
http://www.iranicaonline.org/articles/carpets-ii

Grateful as ever for your help!
James
 
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