Completed Critique Katherine, Elegant Lady Bust

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Anastasiya

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Hello!
I'd like to present one of my first busts, soon avaliable at Morland Studios.
I am sorry for the bad quality of the photos - at that time I was learning to photograph my works and it turned out to be a complicated process that requires some skills :)

Scale: 250 mm
 

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Oh my gosh, what a lovely, very feminine bust.
And this is your first effort? Wow, I would think
doing female facial features would be so difficult.
Of particular note, in my view, is the arrangement
of the hair, particularly with the back of the head.
Very charming young lady, in a most wholesome way.
Also, love the very artistic avatar! Good luck with
the bust commercially. Most impressive. And with
the photos? I think perhaps you're being a little too
hard on yourself. Everything is in sharp focus. :)
 
Thank you for positive comments! They really inspire to constant improvement of my sculpting skills!:)
This is one of my first busts, but still it's the favourite one so I am really happy that you liked it!
 
Oh my gosh, what a lovely, very feminine bust.
And this is your first effort? Wow, I would think
doing female facial features would be so difficult.
Of particular note, in my view, is the arrangement
of the hair, particularly with the back of the head.
Very charming young lady, in a most wholesome way.
Also, love the very artistic avatar! Good luck with
the bust commercially. Most impressive. And with
the photos? I think perhaps you're being a little too
hard on yourself. Everything is in sharp focus. :)
Thank you for kind words! I really appreciate!:happy:
 
Very pleasant sculpt. I am love she!
But I see some small anatomy bug. Note on real diameter of eyeball and detailing of caruncles.
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Анастасия, очень приятная скульптура получилась! Мне она нравится своей элегантностью!
Но обратите внимание на диаметр глазных яблок, тут он, очевидно, заметно больше обычных 2,5 см и деталировку века и глаза в районе карункул (слезного канальца), там глаз имеет более сложную структуру и этот элемент должен быть более заглублен.
 
Thanks a lot! :shy:
Very pleasant sculpt. I am love she!
But I see some small anatomy bug. Note on real diameter of eyeball and detailing of caruncles.
----
Анастасия, очень приятная скульптура получилась! Мне она нравится своей элегантностью!
Но обратите внимание на диаметр глазных яблок, тут он, очевидно, заметно больше обычных 2,5 см и деталировку века и глаза в районе карункул (слезного канальца), там глаз имеет более сложную структуру и этот элемент должен быть более заглублен.
Thank you!
Yes, I agree with you! I need a lot of practice to improve my skills on the anatomy of the face, but I'm working on it. This is one of earlier works, I hope it improved since then:)

Спасибо!
Да, я согласна с Вами! Мне нужно много практиковаться, чтоб улучшить свои навыки в лепке анатомически правильного лица, но я постоянно работаю над этим! Это одна из ранних работ и я надеюсь, что скоро будет виден прогресс.
 
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