pinnochio

[swartepat]

this is my pinnochio

i am a debutant

what are you thinking from this?

Print edited for size (way too big)

 

[captnenglish]

Very nicely done.

 

[Christos]

Good work Patrick!

 

[DaveCox]

I think you've made a good job of this vignette Patrick!

 

[Major_Goose]

nice setup myfriend anda good job . Keep on trying

 

[megroot]

Good work Patrick,

The vignette looks really convincing.

marc

 

[Brushguy]

Nice work, Patrick!

I really like all the small added details.
Do you have an more image of the scene in whole?

Only critic I would say so far, which isn't even a "real" critic, but only my personal taste. I would have approached the whole scene a bit more workshop-like.
It looks a but, as if he has his working table set up in his living room. On the other hand, maybe Master Gepetto was actually living in a combined livingroom/workshop setting? I fear, I don't remember exactly how it was discribed in the novel.

Anyway, what ever I say, you did a fine job with your scene!

Cheers

 

[Blind Pew]

Well composed, I like it. Keep up the good work.

 

[Roc]

I agree with everybody else, good work.

Cheers
Roc