WIP Critique 32mm Ezio

[lespauljames]

hey all, current W.I.P, of "Renaissance assassin 32mm"

I hope you like. ( ps, i have not forgotten the Huscarle)

 

[Patrick Kamsma]

I painted this one myself couple of months back. It was a fun project.

Some small pointers:
- The middle picture, where the cape shows the red corner. There is some brown visible where it should be red.
Small thing easiliy fixed
- The leaves which are scatterd around are too big. In combination with the different colored tiles on the floor, it draws too much attention. Discard the leaves/debris and dust the floor a bit with a bit of a sandcolor.
The figure will stand out a bit more.

You did a good job. Especially considering the size. I like the setting.

Grtz
Patrick

 

[lespauljames]

thanks Patrick, fixed the cape!,
as for the leaves they are much more subdued and subtle to the eye.
i am having a little tRouble making the metallics "pop" any tips?

J

 

[Patrick Kamsma]

I used vallejo silver and some white for the extreme highlights.
You should use lesser darker colors. The metalparts look almost black.

My version:

More pics:
http://www.scalemodelfactory.nl/gallery-patrickkamsma.html

Grtz
Patrick

 

[lespauljames]

the black + gloss is a base for my metallics, my base metal was GW boltgun metal, then vallejo silver, then metal medium, maybe i'll mix up some metal medeum an white to go on the highs.
Nice figure by the way, details look so much moRe Refined than my attempt. anyways, there will be more complete images soon! J

 

[Dave J]

Love the Assassins Creed Series! Who makes this figure? I have to get one!

 

[lespauljames]

Moeggo did you get my post on your wall?..

the metallics are done..