I think it is very difficult to portray the horrific suffering of the Holocaust without the figure looking 'comic.' The painting is very well done; removing the bird on the shoulder I think would add to the power of the piece. A daring and commendable effort!
I must add that I am impressed by the graciousness displayed by the comments on this, even though it is a sensitive subject; everyone has responded with respect. There have been so many periods in history of cruelty and outright evil around the world; representing it in art serves to make sure we never forget.
Evil abounds when good men do nothing...
Mary