Rog - Your artillery driver looks very well painted, but the photography is much too dark. It's a great figure also - one of Steve Warrilow's best.
Normally, to the extent possible, I like to use outdoor lighting when taking figure pictures. Much easier and provides a well-lighted image even in close-ups.
When I am forced to take photos indoors, I usually use one of my free-standing bench lights. I position it so that it lights the figure indirectly by reflecting light off the wall or ceiling. I found that directly lighting the piece with a lamp produced stark shadows and glare and the flash indoors produced unmanageable white glare.
Hope this helps.
All the best,
Dan