Bavarians wip#5

[billyturnip]

Just some minor alterations and additions and then a nice frame;

Roger.

 

[RFL]

I like these Roger, IMO you get better with each new work.

 

[billyturnip]

Thank you Richard and it's nice to hear they are getting better, cheers

Roger.

 

[megroot]

Roger, if i may.
In my opinion the robe of the lady (over her arm) could be more lighter at the top, then over a medium shade down to what it is at the bottom.
The folds more highlighting.

Marc

P.S. I did nothing more on my flat. He lay's in the drybox since my last brushstroke's on it.

 

[billyturnip]

Of course you may Marc. In actual fact I been thinking the same thing myself. My wife also thinks the inside of the parasol should have some more highlights.... but I'm not too sure about that. As usual she's probably right.

Roger.

 

[eissteban]

absolutly beautiful my friend
the colors on the woman are really pleasant,
i like too the bavarian, the blue are well executed.

PS:
when you'll back from sea next time, i hope can show you new things from my vendéens

 

[billyturnip]

Thank you Seb. I'm working on some more highlights in the areas Marc suggested at the moment. Then I need to find a frame. That will have to wait because I go back to sea on tuesday. So I will be seeing the Vendéens in approx one month

Roger.

 

[pmfs]

Hello Roger,

You captured the Bavarian couple very very well.

Regards from Portugal
Pedro

 

[billyturnip]

Thank you very much Pedro

Roger.

 

[unknown01]

Wonderful work.
I think it's very beautiful.
I have not painted a flat.
However your work is wonderful.

Mitsutaka

 

[billyturnip]

Thank you Mitsutaka. Why not give it a go? I am sure with your skill you would produce a very good flat.

Roger.

 

[John Bowery]

Roger,
Looking really good. Hurry back soon.
Cheers
John

 

[Marcel]

Roger,

Great progress, it's getting better and better.
I agree with Marc about more lights on the rope around the arm.

Cheers,
Marcel.

 

[theBaron]

Very nice, Sepp und sei Liesl! Well done, Roger!

Do you have a shot now of the pair in the frame?

Prost!
Brad

 

[billyturnip]

John, Marcel, Brad,

Thanks for the comments, I just got back from sea yesterday. Hopefully I'll have the finishing touches and some kind of frame sorted out soon

Roger

 

[Saginaw79]

Pardon my ignorance, but...are those flat???

 

[billyturnip]

Pardon my ignorance, but...are those flat???

Yes they are and approx 90mm. Thanks for asking... it's reassuring you thought they might be round

Roger.