WIP Critique beginers attempt no. 3

[robert110]

new begining , attempt no. 3 , 32 mm from top to bottom,

cheers
Robert

 

[robert110]

some progress with this one... sorry for bad pictures

cheers
Robert

 

[robert110]

still working, any advice ?

cheers
Robert

 

[pokrad]

Corners of the eyes must go deeper, distance from eyebrows to bottom of the nose should be the same as from bottom of the nose to the bottom of the face (chin). Your lower part of the face is too big...
Keep up...

 

[Azgaron]

Nice work so far Robert!

Cheers,

Håkan

 

[robert110]

Thanks for comments my friends, every advice and comment is helpfull.
So here's some more advance, hope it's toward better not worse.

Cheers
and happy New Year

Robert

 

[pokrad]

Try to first fix this:

You added too much mass there, try to reduce it and keep in mind how the eyesocket looks on the skull - that helps
Try to reduce the space between the tip of the nose and the top of the lips - to me it seems too distant...