Commander in Hannibal's army

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Konrad

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Hello
This is my first post in this forum.
I’d like to make many friends in this forum so I registered recently with some of my Japanese friends. I’d like to improve my figure painting skills so any comments and critique are welcome (even negative comment).

This figure is pegaso 75mm Commander in Hannibal’s army.
I was so impressed by the sculpture, especially the face and the armor.
I poured energy into painting the face.

My English is not so good, so maybe I will write impolite something or not preferable comments without my intention. I apologize in advance.
 

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Very nicely done, the eyes are very good as is the face. The only thing I can see is that maybe the rock could be a darker color, right now it is very similar to the groundwork and the wolf around his neck. This would bring the viewers eyes down the entire figure and take it all in rather than stopping on the pretty parts. Overall this is just an outstanding job in painting. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
 
Makoto your English is just fine and your painting is even better, great looking figure ad the time spent on the face really shows through, great looking eyes.

Steve(y)
 
Wow, I’m surprised to see so many kind comments.
Melanie, Tony, Tommi, Gordy, Mike, Steve, Roberto, Marc, Carl, Thank you very much!
Those comments really encourage me to make more figures.
 
The only thing I can see is that maybe the rock could be a darker color, right now it is very similar to the groundwork and the wolf around his neck. This would bring the viewers eyes down the entire figure and take it all in rather than stopping on the pretty parts.

Thanks for your advice.
I didn't pay much attention to the coloring of the groundwork.
Next time I will care about the groundwork color.

Comment like yours is what I wanted in this forum :)
Thanks again.
 
Hi! Makoto.
Brilliant and gorgeous work!
Awesome eye of you're a figure.
The feel of a material of the metal and a red mantle are very striking.
Great sculpting and Great painting!
I congratulate completion.

Mitsutaka
 
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