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John_Engstrand

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Didn't see this thread existed first, will re post my work here since i always liked to get critique for getting better and understanding different views on my work.

Below is a collage of pictures from the bigger bust and figures that I have finished or working on.

Finished figures:
Grodan 1.jpg
Lilith klar 1.jpg



Ongoing project:

Elf 38.jpg


Will now go back to browse some more in the forums to read and enjoy other peoples work.

/John
 
Magnificent work. For me the eyes on the bullfrog bust are super, the only observation is perhaps a bit more colour and pattern on the throat pouch. It's such a big pale area it tends to look less finished than the rest of the head.
On Lilith, which is beautifully done, I feel you could have gone very much darker with the shading on the wings.
The contrast might well have been washed out by the photo lighting.
Either way your work is outstanding.
Cheers
Derek
 
Magnificent work. For me the eyes on the bullfrog bust are super, the only observation is perhaps a bit more colour and pattern on the throat pouch. It's such a big pale area it tends to look less finished than the rest of the head...

I had the same thought as Del. I love the eyes, too. The throat looks cool--temperature-wise, that is--compared to the rest of the colors. Maybe just add a little of the yellowish cast that makes up the base or background of the rest of his skin? Look at me, giving advice, Mister-I-Never-Finish-Anything.
 
The Bullfrog is awesome, Lilith very nice maybe more shading on the wings and her hair would be nice. The last figure looks very well done his swords need work but I think that's the ongoing project part.
Very nice work you do amazing painting look forward to seeing more from you.
 
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