WIP Critique Evd 54mm Captain Thomas Masterson Hardy

[pmfs]

Hi!

I started this beautiful figure from EVD.
The eyes are almost finished...
What you think?
Cheers

 

[Mike Stevens]

Wow Pedro, Those eyes really pop! You need to block them in a lot more. I'd also tone down the whites. Use a little darker flesh flesh color and white to tone it done.

Mike

 

[pmfs]

Mike, I realy dont like them, I will repaint with a dark tone.
Thank you very much for your words.

Cheers,
Pedro.

 

[Ferris]

Really well done on the iris and pupil in this scale. They really sparkle. I tend to agree with Mike about the white of the eye. I think it's a bit too white. But maybe it helps if you do the outlining Mike mentions. Maybe that makes the eyes a bit smaller. They are rather big in the sculpt it seems.

Those darn eyes, I hate that job and usually have to it more than once. More than twice actually...

Cheers mate,
Adrian

 

[Christosjager]

Really well painted eyes but they are a bit big for this 54mm miniature Pedro. Nice decision to repaint them.

 

[pmfs]

Hi Adrian and Christos!

Thanks guys, I dont know why, but i´ve always make the eyes bigger.
It will be a challenge work with blues and whites, but in the end the captain will in good shape.

Cheers,
Pedro.

 

[Christosjager]

but in the end the captain will in good shape

I am sure about that

 

[mil-mart]

Pedro a great figure and looking forward to following.

Cheers Ken

 

[pmfs]

Thank you Ken.

Pedro.

 

[housecarl]

I don't think the eyes are too bright Pedro, I think you need to bring the lids in closer.
Carl.

 

[pmfs]

Carl thanks mate!
I modified the eyes of the Captain and this is the final version.
Hope you like it?

Pedro.

 

[housecarl]

I think you could still bring the lower lids up Pedro.
He looks like someone told him Portugal are getting rid of the Euro.
Carl.

 

[pmfs]

I think you could still bring the lower lids up Pedro.
He looks like someone told him Portugal are getting rid of the Euro.
Carl.

...we should never have entered into the Euro zone, I never felt "European"...
I live much better in the old times Carl.

Cheers

 

[Carlos69]

Nice start Pedro ! Good to meet you at Euro buddy

 

[pmfs]

Hi mate!

...me to my friend and see your amazing work there.

Cheers

 

[Christosjager]

lol Carl,
Pedro I see that you have painted the lower eyelids (eyebags), I believe that for this scale it's very difficult (and unnecessary) to paint the eyes the way you want, repaint.