Completed Critique Gebirgsjäger WW2

[Jan]

I think he is finisht, al the things i will do extra will end in a disaster or starting over again.
I hope you like it a bit.







Grtx Jan

 

[Martin Antonenko]

I like him, Jan!

Cheers

 

[megroot]

Looks good,
But the eyeball is to white. That can be easy correct trough a very thin layer with off white. Try the scincolor with white. Another item to correct in my opinon are the teeth....also to white. A MacLeans smile whas not common in those days


Marc

 

[RonW]

ohh I do like those whites, even if I feel that they are a tad too clean.
The other colors are well done too.

 

[taff edwards]

Hi Mate
Great job , and white being such a in forgiving colour like the tones on the equipment.
I tend to put a bit of flesh in my white for the eye just seems to take the edge off it
Thanks for sharing

 

[Dan Morton]

Well done!!

All the best,
Dan

 

[John Bowery]

I agree with all the above.
Cheers
John