Hi Paul,
Sorry to put you through so much grief mate, but I think that looks much better and far more realistic. There are plenty of guys on pF who have worn the flak jacket while in the services so they are better qualified to talk about how they looked (and smelled). It's not always easy to judge a figure based on a photo, and I appreciate that sometimes a figure can look vastly different in real life than it does in a photo. The deeper shadows also help add a sense of depth and grunge to the figure which I like.