WIP Critique Mi first bust - 1/12 Aresmythologic

[Fabricio_Fay]

Hola!!!!

This is mi first bust, the painting is been done all with acrilic's. I have used the airbrush for the first shadows and first lights in the face, before i have used the paintbruh to define the volumes and forms.

As always the critics and advices will bee very welcomed.

Cheers from Brasil!!!!

 

[Mike S.]

Coming along beautifully!

 

[Einion]

The face is looking very good Fabrício. I would suggest adding some grey to the beard areas if he's going to be dark haired, plus perhaps a touch more red to the lips.

Quick thing on the armour, since you appear to have undercoated this in red - if you're doing this as a historic subject this wouldn't have been leather. Polished bronze is the most likely material.

Einion

 

[SRP]

For a first bust....it's coming along really well..congrats...Fabricio....
Steve

 

[housecarl]

The face looks really well Fabrício.
Carl.

 

[BlackWarrior]

it's a very impressive work. i'll look forward to finishing this art-work!!!

 

[Voidec]

You did great job on face! I like it!
Wojtek

 

[iwik]

Hi there!
The eyes are killing me! Very well done.
However, something bugs me about the face. It looks too brown. Maybe a bit more highlights at some crucial parts?
Can't wait to see the rest though...
Ciao
IWik

 

[rheath]

Beautiful start up work the skin tones give great character. Keep is very much in the loop.

 

[Gellso]

I love the airbrushing effect. Looks great so far.Following with interest.

 

[rej]

You have used the airbrush to great effect Fabricio, I really like it!!

Ray