WIP Critique Old project back at bench......

[pmfs]

Hi!

One year and many figures before, I will finish this scenario that was almost forgotten in my closet.
This year was the turning point in figure painting for me, because i started painting other themes such as: Rome, Crusades, ACW and Napoleonic figures instead of Germans my preference to date - not anymore.
As you see, this base is not finished yet, still some work to do but you get an idea.
The German figure are primed already and he is a Latorre´s grenadier with some modifications made by me to give the figure another look...
Let me read your thoughts about it.

Pedro.

 

[Evgeny Golubev]

Good base for a good vignettes.

 

[Aveleira]

Beautifully done!! Waiting to see it with figure!

Regards
Pedro

 

[pmfs]

Evgenie and Pedro, many thanks for the comments.

Pedro.

 

[Tarracus]

Hi Pedro! It looks nice..If I may make just 1 little comment, in my opinion the debris fragments look too regular in size, i would try to add some smaller ones, or perhaps just paint some of the bricks shifting a little the base color tones.
Anyway, looking forward to see it with its figure

 

[pmfs]

Gerard, thanks for your time leaving the positive criticism. Today when i take the pic notice that groundwork need more attention, dont know yet what I will add, one thing i know, she wont be like you see right now.
cheers

 

[Ferris]

Very good-looking groundwork Pedro. I like its composition and colours.

I would just suggest to weather the clock's dial plate some more. It's a bit plain now.
Maybe you can apply some shades and hoghlights and give it a satin coat.
You could also add some shreds of glass with clear plastic bits?

Looking forward to the figures!

Cheers,
Adrian

PS: by the way, is that a bird on top of the wall? If so: nice.

 

[swralph]

looks good

 

[pmfs]

Adrian and Swralph thanks guys!
Adrian, is not finished yet. The clock (glass, nice idea ) will be painted next week. Not a bird is a telegraph but i will add a black crow in the top left of the wall.
You will see the 1:35 Tamiya chicken transformed into a crow.

Cheers