WIP Critique Photojournalist 1971

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Meehan34

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I thought I'd share some progress of my photojournalist. I have just started on the cameras but the rest of him is getting close to complete. I made his skin very warm to contrast with the green jacket. For some reason all the various tones and shades don't photograph well. Let me know what you think.
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Whoa Mike, that looks seriously well!
How about a blue or red background? Maybe that contrasts his colours to bring some life to the pictures.

Adrian
 
The skin tones look very nice... but I think the white hair is something that really catches the eye on this bust. Different, but really well done.

Mario
 
I like it a lot Mike. It might be one of your best bust up to date. I like the jacket especially very much. There is only one thing that may need attention in my opinion. I am talking about eyes, you could try to bring them to live a little bit more.
 
Nice work ! the hair and level of contrast you have worked in is great ... maybe id tweek the eyes some more but cannot tell from the images buddy.
 
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