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robert110

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New attempt...rough sketch

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Hi Robert

Liking the way this is looking if I may ....

perhaps soften the creases on the arms , they look a little deep

Angle the lower torso sides slightly and just check the lower edging of the collar

Are you putting a base with it ?

Thanks for sharing

Nap
 
Thanks Nap, yes base will be ... thinking something like tail of his bf 109 ..

cheers
Robert
 
The collar. there should be a hole (some empty space) at the lower part visible below the collar - this way it looks too flat at the ends.
For the rest, great work ;)
 
I think overall this looks great.....But...maybe for your next one;..I would suggest a different mounting base for your sculpt. Something with a little more radius as there are not too many people with a lower torso that flat across the front. Just a suggestion...Either way...Keep up the good work.....

Wayne
 
No.....Take that same approximate radius and look from the top; I know the pockets are there which will add some bulk to the sides...but you have to imagine the human body underneath......Every suggestion helps or at least gets you thinking right or wrong....If you make that cut as shown; it might take away some of the visual aspect of flatness in the front. Personally....If you agree with me ; take it as a lesson learned and move on. Your next one will be better. If you don't agree; just tell me to pound salt and still move on...You're on your way.

Wayne
 
Aah yes, flat chest , yes You are right... thanks for suggestion.. Well, this one is going on the shelf and after r&r next is going on the workbench ...thanks for watching and comments ... keep them coming please !
cheers
Robert
 
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