sculpt no. 10

[robert110]

new attempt ... in progress..

 

[John Ballard]

This is a nice looking sculpt, however since you asked for precise criticisms. I believe the overall head is a little too thin, from front to back. The rear of he cranium should be a little more full. I also think the mouth and jaw line are a little too far forward which causes the nose to be a little elongated and large. Finally the upper eyelids are a little too smoothly circular and might look better with more of a parabolic shape if you know what I mean.
Having said all that this has lots of very nice touches to it already.
John

 

[robert110]

Thanks for reply ... yeah You are right I screw up lots of things on this one but decide to continue and practice , trying hair and chain-mail .... no. 11 is on the way... I'm pretty done with this one .. last pictures :