Hi,
your colors choice are nice and surely as in real life.
But the final rendition is too warm. Only 2 thin cold blue lines....
There is something that can turn your figure "outstanding".
Try to paint some cold color cloths between warm colors.
The secret is to put like boxes one cold, one warm, and then another cold and another warm.
I hope you understand my meaning (my poor english written....).
By putting closer cold and warm colors you emphazis the final looks of the figure.
Sometimes you look at a figure painted and you dont know why, but you really like it. Even if you can see brush marks.....
That's because of a good combinaison of cold/warm colors....
Hope it helps.....
JP