Completed Critique Templar st lazarus order

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dimgall

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hello friends my latest job here.all acrylics except some inks for metals.i went for a soldiers of the st lazarus order .hope you like it any critique and comments are welcome!!
take care everybody
Dimitris

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Overall this looks very good, nice job. Two things I noticed immediately though, the grain direction on the axe haft and the second is the whiteness of the highlights on the scratches on the shield. For light scratches generally I think it's good to aim for the highlight line to be as thin as possible, when depicting a deeper gouge then I'd use a colour that represents the material that would be exposed by the cut - so more of a light leather colour.

Einion
 
thanks Xenofon ,Brian,Nick,Peter,Babis,Jim and Danis for the comments!!!(y)

thanks Einion for the advice.i will try to correct on my next shield!!
 
Beautiful work. Is it a commercially available piece? Only I haven't seen this one before. And what scale?

- Steve
 
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