US paratrooper

[romain]

hello everybody

here is a WIP of a us paratrooper , this is my second 54 mm and my first " historical " mini , you can hard criticizes my , it is not a problem
I hope that great sculptors will give my many advices
romain

 

[MAB]

Hello Romain as second 54 are indeed good.
If to accept my critics I can say that the anatomy under me seems good and also the folds of the pants go well.
I have some doubt on the length of the extensive arm would have little more short to be and I would reduce also folds little.
However a good job compliments and continues to send photo.
As usual I make excuses myself for my English (and also for the French you of it know something) :lol:

MAB

 

[garyjd]

Romain, I think the figure is well done at this stage. Being that it's your second 54mm figure, it's something to be proud of. If the right arm is too long it is by very little. You could take some folds out, however I am not so sure there are too many. Please update your progress as time allows.~Gary

 

[Jim Patrick]

Romain, I only saw two things and couldn't really tell about the arm (I couldn't see it well) but then again, I don't sculpt ANYTHING much less what Maurizio and Gary sculpt. What I noticed was his jacket. This guy is taking a pretty wide step (or so it seems). Yet, his jacket at the front, is stuck together like it's freshly pressed and won't move. Shouldn't it be open at the front a little? Not really sure. Just thought it would add a little more. Also, the right arm. Shouldn't it be swinging? I guess it just depends on what he's carrying in his hand. If it's something not quite so heavy, it should be swinging a little. Other than that, I really like this guy. Nice looking jump suit and only after your second figure?! WOW! Much better than anything I can di I'm ashamed to admit. Keep us posted on your progress Romain. I'd like to see how this turns out.

Jim Patrick

 

[romain]

this guy will be smoking ( right hand ) and he has a weapon in the other hand .... He will have his foot on a hemet on the floor

I will resculpt the movement of the jacket this is sure , and I will probably change the lenght of the right arm

thank you for your comments

 

[romain]

hello !!

 

[romain]

 

[garyjd]

Romain, thanks for the mini update. The sculpting is really looking good.~Gary

 

[thomas barse]

Congratulations Romain, the folds are very good, I specially like the little ones on the trousers!
I really want to see the head!!

Thomas

 

[Manfred]

Looks good to me so far.
You are gifted if this is your second sculpt.

What is your sculpting medium? Brown Stuff or by chance Fimo ?

 

[romain]

I use chocolate fimo + super sculptey