Hello Marta:
I'm almost hesitant to comment here. For one thing I'm
an old man, American. My meaning is that some of the terms
you wrote, I do not know what they mean. So in some respects,
I feel I'm "out of the loop" as we say. . . . I feel my opinion below
states — and it is only one old artist's opinion — that the clothes
are too clean.
I love the colour scheme. But personally, I would like to see more
evidence of colour harmony in the terrain. I realize that some
here have said that "don't do too much with the ground cover,
the terrain", as it can draw the eye away from the figure. And
that opinion does have merit, as I see it. However, I think there are
strong blues in your figure's clothing. And IMHO, there is so
much blue in plant life, growing things, particularly in the
shadow areas. As I see it, even the log can have hints of a
soft bluish tone. For me, that would bring everything to-
gether, everything in harmony regarding the Colour
choices, not only for his "costume" but also for the surroundings.
Yes, I'm only talking about a very minor painting adjustment. . .
just a hint of those cooler side of the colour wheel washes. . .
Regardless, it is still a lovely piece. And the photo-
graphs are of top quality. Congratulations to you, dear
lady. From The Miami Jayhawk.
