Not horrible at all. Try to get a fine brush to line shadows a bit more darkly along seams and edges. Also try for more contrast, particularly on lighter colours like the face, stockings and feathers (deeper darker shadows). This is important when painting smaller scales but it is also a matter of personal taste. You have done good detail work. Uniform braid is often better rendered in browns and yellows rather than gold but again that is a style thing.
For detail work, use good brushes that come to a point and take very good care if them.
Much better than my first figure but you can't expect to be expert in one go. You seem to work quickly which is good as it will allow you to advance quickly if you don't get frustrated. You clearly have what it takes.
Colin