Completed Critique After Death(Corruption)

[TURKOGLU]

Hı, My first sculpting attempt. I have made this bust from Super sculpey modeling clay. Scale practically 1/6. I hope you lıke it.
All critiques and comments are wellcome.
This product not a commercial, for me.(I don't paint it)

 

[Richard61]

Hi Turkoglu.
Whilst not being my topic of interest, I commend your sculpting work.
The only critique I feel confident in giving is in relation to the teeth.... The front ones are too square in section and the spacing looks to be off......Still a damn good first go though I.M.O.

Richard.

 

[TURKOGLU]

Richard, thanks for nice words. I'll take care your advise my next sculpt project. But this bust is done and can't change teeth or other.

Regards from TURKEY