WIP Arnhem

[Briggsy]

What Neil said.

Simon

 

[Richie]

Thought I would post the original next too the changed version.

 

[Briggsy]

Definitely an improvement.

Simon

 

[Merryweather]

What Simon said

 

[NigelR]

Agree, definitely an improvement.

 

[Nap]

Hi Richie

WOW another great project is planned , your certainly well organised

As for the stubble ....definately heavy ....personally I’d take it back slightly....just my thoughts !...

But it’s better than the clean look on original

Looking forward to seeing more on both projects

Have fun

Nap

 

[Richie]

Hi Nap,
I think I agree with you so I have removed it and will start again.
Cheers Richie

 

[Merryweather]

Flock, maybe, like action man....?

 

[Richie]

Flock, maybe, like action man....?

Is that flock a predictive text error!
I've adjusted it now.

 

[Richie]

Here we go