Completed Critique BREAKFAST AT STALINGRAD VERLINDEN 120mm,Finished.

[unknown01]

Thank you very much, Christos.

Thank you very much for your valuable advice and comment, Christos.
You're right.
I have a bad habit in painting.
That's to try to paint as showily as possible.
I think a lip and an eyebrow lack reality as you say.
These can be corrected, so I'd like to correct.
Your advice was study very much.
Thank you very much.
And thank you for liking it.

Mitsutaka.

 

[unknown01]

Thank you very much, Kazufumi.

Thank you very much for your valuable advice and comment, Kazufumi.
I think how to complete it the way you say certainly is best about a lip.
I forgot to put highlights in a lip.
I think this can also be corrected, so I consider correction.
I feel this result be not perfect about an eye.
However this is the limit as me about this figure.
However from the figure which is the next by a way of your advice, TRY, will.
Thank you for telling me an important thing.
And thank you for liking it.

Mitsutaka.

 

[unknown01]

Thank you very much, Eddy.

Thank you very much for your kind comment, my friend Eddy.
I'd like also to make you satisfied for me also to make the work which can respond to your expectation from now on.
Thank you for liking it.

Mitsutaka.