Help Wanted (Man)

[pokrad]

Thank You Dan

 

[Oda]

One hell of a work.Awesome,absolutely awesome.Great likeness of that fabulous artist.And if soneone tells you otherwise then remember Sam Hall....and damn their eyes...

Oda

 

[pokrad]

Sam Hall....and damn their eyes...

Oda

Haha, that's good one
Thakns !

 

[pokrad]

I was playing a bit more with the collars, not perfect, but fingers are itchy for a new clay
Maybe a few wrinkles to add on the forehead, and then in the oven:

 

[Dan Morton]

And slightly heavier upper eyelids maybe?

All the best,
Dan

 

[pokrad]

I do not know, maybe it looked like eyelids were to "slim" because eyebrows were missing ?
What do You think ?

 

[Dan Morton]

Better but I still think the upper eye lids would look better if a bit fuller. Just my opinion.

Dan

 

[pokrad]

Still not there with the eyes:

 

[Dan Morton]

The only suggestion I can make is to add some fine creases and lines to the eye pouches themselves and below the lower eye pouches. Don't know if that would help or not. The likeness is so good right now, I'd be tempted to leave it as is.

Are you planning to thin the edges of the shirt collars? Would look better a bit thinner.

Thanks for letting me make suggestions! Hope I helped a little.

All the best,
Dan

 

[pokrad]

I do not like shirt collars in whole, but now it will be a problem to change them without destroying coat collar and part of the neck. Maybe I'll just thin the edges as You said.
Your comments were very helpful, thanks !

 

[pokrad]

Thinned and fixed shirt collars, added a tiny part of lower eyelids of the outer corners (visible on ref images).
I do not know how this looks to other eyes, but this is my first sculpt after more than 5 years of learning that I actually like.
Sure, on the pics many errors are visible, and it could be much better, but I like it. Really strange feeling, as I hated all of the previous pieces the second they were finished

 

[Dan Morton]

You're there, Darko!

For me the slight improvements have clinched it. The likeness is very good.

All the best,
Dan

 

[pokrad]

Baked without cracks and mounted on base. Thank You all for heads up, that's all from me and Johnny...

 

[pokrad]

Bust arrived today to Hungary, BAM is preparing casts

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