Super job!
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As a learner myself, your first figure looks a lot better than my first!!! Some suggestions:
(1) On folds and creases in clothing, uniforms, etc., less is more [most of the time]. Here's what I do - try to find a coat or some trousers of your own that look at least a little like those you're sculpting. Put them on and 'pose' yourself in front of a mirror. Or better - take digital pics and use them as references. The right folds and creases in clothing makes the whole figure more believable and reality-based. There are lots of nuances to clothing folds and creases, but for those I refer you to texts by Bill Horan and others.
(2) When I started I didn't know about one of the 'tricks' of the trade - using hand lotion to smooth out the putty as it is drying. Take a look at some of Einion, Guy, or Roy Hunt's sculpting to see masters of smooth sculpting. [Don't use me as an example! I'm still very much a learner.] In future projects try the lotion and smooth it on with a paint brush. You'll find the need to sand reduced considerably. Also, look for those small errant whitish blobs of putty and remove them with an old paint brush and water before they dry. That will also reduce sanding and yield a smoother finish.
If you haven't discovered it already, Guy's Sculpting 101 is a great resource! Lots of gems there!
Good luck and I look forward to future posts!
And ps - if no one has told you - protect your hands against the chemicals in all 2 part putties. You can develop some unpleasant allergies from them. Supple, thin disposable gloves work great!
All the best,
Dan