Looks great to me. The only comment I would have is on the hair and beard. I would add some darker patches on the beard to break up the grey/white so it doesn't look so uniform. Maybe a dark wash here and there would change it just enough. Looks real good overall
Steve
Peter, I think all of the comments above would really enhance what is an extremely well and neatly painted bust.
The metals are excellent and a few carefully applied washes and a matt finish to the cloak are all thats needed.
Cheers
Derek