WIP Critique 1/12 Rizzla/Suzuki Pitbabe

[pokrad]

Lack of free time latelly does not give me the chance to work more on this, but it will be better after a new year I hope...
Thx for head up

 

[redhorse]

Lack of free time latelly does not give me the chance to work more on this, but it will be better after a new year I hope...

I hope so too, I've been enjoying your work on this one.

 

[pokrad]

Week off, so I could not ressist (did not sculpt for a looong time),
so I started a new one (still rough):

 

[Renéduret]

Darko,

it's great! the movement is verrrry good and so much more attractive than the static one.


think it's wise to write to Mattel.
think I would buy a Barbie immediately made by you.

 

[pokrad]

Unfortunately that is a good point, cause I'm trying to get realistic body, and getting this stiff, plastic volumes, but not yet ready to quit
ANY criticism or help is welcome

 

[Renéduret]

no no, I am telling you in fact it's time they wrote you, the movement is already a great step forward!

 

[darkeye]

hiya,

like the proportions and such on the first; the seconnd is nice and softer but both have some edits required.

the inner leg has 3 curves that make up its form or shape. the missing one is on the inside of the knee ; caused by the fatty tissue covering the attatchment of the inner leg muscles, the sartorus being the main one.

a good tip is to look for 'S' curves in body forms. they are all over. on the legs, the brow to cheek to mandible has one, and ribcage to obliques to the hip flexor is another.... girls are a tougher deal than muscular guys but keep at it! lord knows i been on that journey for a while....

all the best -- tim

 

[pokrad]

Thx for observation, I'll try to use some of it

Some more "progress":

 

[Renéduret]

great legs, great butt!!