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Planet member Bruno Schmaling, Submitted this Book Review on the Osprey Book, Comanche

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Douglas V. Meed, Comanche 1800 – 1874
Osprey Publishing, 68 pages, Paperback
ca. 50 Photos und Drawings, 8 Colourpages

When the book was published, I was very curious for two reasons. My first reason is that twenty-five years ago, my father-in-law wrote the best selling German book on the German trek to Texas. In the research for this book, he found a good number of unpublished letters by German immigrants who described their relationship with the Comanche people. The second reason is that the University of Berlin had a long relationship with the Comanche, and its studies on Comanche culture and history are highly renowned in the scientific society.

Mr. Meed's book starts with a brief description of the weapons, the tactics and the horses of the Comanche. The main part of the book tells the story of the war against the Comanche people. It is interesting, that the author describes the peaceful relationship between the German settlers under the leadership of Baron von Meusebach and the Comanche people, a historical event that showed that the Comanche were willing to live in peace with white settlers, if they kept the treaties.

Unfortunately, the book very soon turned out to be much more the history of the war of the State of Texas against the Comanche people entirely written from the white point of view. There is nearly nothing written about the builders of Comanche society, the history of the different bands, and very little about their culture, mythology, rituals and beliefs and the role of the warrior. The book lacks a good description of the social life of the people, as well as anything specific about the development of cloth, dress or the material culture of the Comanche. Even a biography of the great chiefs is missing.

The author does not give me the feeling that he had the necessary sympathetic understanding or the needed in-depth knowledge of the Comanche people and their heritage. This is also shown by the ethnocentric sources he used as the bibliography. T.R. Fehrenbach's book Comanche is his main source and is heavy criticised by European historians and ethnologists for his racist tendencies. The other main source, James DeShild's book “Border Wars of Texas” is an historical document, but it was written by a dedicated Indian-hater and had to be used with care. It's hard to understand why the author did not use the fundamental works on the Comanche: Ernest Wallace and Adamson Hoebel's The Comanches, Jean Louis Berlandier's The Indians of Texas in 1830, Hermann Lehmann's Nine years among the Indians, Bill Neeley's The Last Comanche Chief, William T. Hagan's Quanah Parker or Margaret Schmidt Hacker's Cynthia Ann Parker.

The author also overrules white reports of the cruelties of the Comanche people without any critical reflections, despite the faithfulness of these reports being questioned in the new historical research. On the other hand, the killing and cruelties executed by white people against Comanche women and children and reports of white captives of the Comanche people who were treated in a good way are consequently swept under the carpet.

At the beginning of 1800, the Comanche numbered 8,000-10,000 members. Only 1,500 members survived the extermination through war and disease from the white man. The book could have been a chance to represent the great culture of this people and the development of their material culture during 70 years, which would be very interesting for the figurine painter, as well as to show a fair and balanced view towards the often defamed Comanche people and their sorrowful history. Unfortunately, all these chances were wasted. I’m very much disappointed about the quality of this book and give it only one star out of five.

Bruno Schmäling
 
Bruno,
Thank you for the review, I found it useful. I understand your misgivings about the text and have this to be true about most Osprey books on non-European/non-Asian clutures. I have one question for you though, how are the plates? Afterall this is thereason for buying Osprey books and not there historical insight IMHO.
 
Bruno: Thank you for your detailed account of the new book. I like your uncompromising and well-argued point of view. It's a perfect example of what every review should be. (y)

Matthew: From what I've seen in the 'Tribes of the Sioux Nation' book, I'm sorry to say that I'm not impressed by Jonathan Smith's illustrations. I prefer the concise style of Richard Hook. Check out his 'Warriors at the Little Bighorn 1876', one of the best Indian books around, bar none.

Happy Holidays,
Quang
 
Originally posted by quang@Dec 29 2005, 06:46 PM
Bruno: Thank you for your detailed account of the new book. I like your uncompromising and well-argued point of view. It's a perfect example of what every review should be. (y)

Matthew: From what I've seen in the 'Tribes of the Sioux Nation' book, I'm sorry to say that I'm not impressed by Jonathan Smith's illustrations. I prefer the concise style of Richard Hook. Check out his 'Warriors at the Little Bighorn 1876', one of the best Indian books around, bar none.

Happy Holidays,
Quang
Quang,
Both of these are/were on my list of Osprey titles to get, but maybe, I'll rethink the one on the Sioux, thanks for the input.
 
The plates in the Sioux book would have been better had Richard Hook done them. I bought mine on Ebay for $1.55! Not to sound nit picky but there are a number of titles, especially recent ones that would have benefitted by having an illustrator whose style compliments the books/period better. If it's not by Chappell, Embleton, Hook, or McBride I like to see it first. I really would like to see more plates by Andrei Karachtchouk as his illustrations have that period look about them that the "old timers" don't/can't nail down. Sorry for the mini rant.~Gary
 
Hi friends,

thank you for comment. I make the review for German magazines, because a good number of figurine friends want to paint correct indians and to know the real history, but they can't judge the quality. I for myselfe could not judge the quality of a book about American Civil War, as it is not my subject and I had to rely what I read.
I give my thrue meanings and the reason for this meanings in my reviews, I don't like what we in Germany call "Royal houshould reports" which means you write what someone wants to hear.
After a talk with Guy, I started to translate this reviews into English language and I'm happy to receive your comment for my worke.

According to the coloure plates:
Unfortunately the colourpaltes are not better like the text. Plate A shows drawings of the original pieces of the Berlandier collection, this is the only good plate. The other plates shows warriors in breachcloth and leggings, who could be any other Indian tribe on the Plains as this don't show the specification of Comanche dresses. Another plate mistakes Kiowa dress for Comanche and on Plate B a Comanche woman is shown with a dress of 1840 and a baby cradle of 1870. The Tipis shown in the drafts are not painted on the plates, on another plate some leggings ar in Northern Plains style and so on and so on...

It is a problem with Osprey, that it seemd that they don't take much care of the quality of the author.
Michael G. Johnsons and Richard Hook are superbe experts on Indians, others like Meed or Robinson not.

I agree with Quang, Richard Hooks book "Warriors on the Little Bighorn" is one of the best books ever written on this subject. The drafts and the athencity of the cloth are outstanding!!!
I just do a review on this book for two German Magazines and two Indian supporting society web sites in Germany. I will make a translation and publish it at the Planet Figure.

Have a happy and peaceful New Year!

Bruno
 
Originally posted by Bruno@Dec 30 2005, 07:57 AM
I don't like what we in Germany call "Royal houshould reports" which means you write what someone wants to hear.


Bruno
Bruno, I would never tell consumers what the publisher would like to hear regarding their product. I believe in being honest, if not brutally honest in some cases regarding the item being reviewed. Osprey may not even really be concerned with negative reviews. Too bad there is not another publisher to give them some competition.~Gary
 
Hi Gary,

I try always to be honest. Figurines and Indian hitory is my hobby and I have no commercial interest in it. So I write what I think is correct.

The problem of a good number of booklets is, that they, like bad Hollywood movies, creat the "history" in the minde of many persons, who belive what is written in suche booklets, even it is based on outdated historical material ore full of prejustice.
It is much easier to make a Indian movie a la John Wayne than to make a movie like "Dances with Wolfes" ore the fascinating "Into the West" by Steven Spielberg. At "Into the West" you can even see the difference of the Tipi of the Lakota and Crow, if you look carefully, it is great!!!

According to the history of the North American Indians we had to have in minde that nearly the whole history was written by white people, a good number of them were fighting the Indians, they want their land and need reasons to fight or hate them.
To write a good book on Indians needs a very carefully examination of the white sources and testemonies to seperate facts from fiction and propaganda. Unfortunately a good number of authors are to lazy and don't want to do that lot of worke. They just take some secound ore even third class literature and make a new book out of 5 bad old books.

By the way, if you don't like the drafts of Jonathan Smith, the text of the Osprey "Tribes of the Sioux Nation" is excellent!

Many greatings from a very cold and snowing Bavaria

Bruno
 
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