Completed Critique Spartan Officer

[megroot]

This figure is in my opinion now Completed.
Like to here some comments, good or bad.
Pictures are not so good in quality, my photolights went down.

Marc

 

[dimgall]

nice reds Marc !!!good job!!.keep up
Dimitris

 

[Ron Tamburrini]

Hi Marc.

I don't wish to be to critical as it may just be the photos,but there seems to be a lot of paint on this one, and it would appear that you are dragging the colours
into one another which is muddying things up a bit, sorry to be so obtuse
but hopefully this is constructive critque.

Ron

 

[pmfs]

Nice work my friend!!!

 

[megroot]

Hi Marc.

I don't wish to be to critical as it may just be the photos,but there seems to be a lot of paint on this one, and it would appear that you are dragging the colours
into one another which is muddying things up a bit, sorry to be so obtuse
but hopefully this is constructive critque.

Ron

Thanks Ron, you may critical as much as you wish.
I saw the muddy colors on the pictures to, but you gotta believe me on my wroting words....in reality it isn't.
I think that it is done by PS when i brought back the contrast. As wrote before, my photolights broke up and i did this with other lights where i'm not so satisfied with.

Marc

 

[megroot]

Pedro, thank you so much

marc

 

[megroot]

dim,
Thanks.

 

[billyturnip]

A good paint job on a nice sculpt Marc, he looks like a real old campaigner.

Roger.

 

[Sambaman]

Marc, over all I think you've got a great piece here. The reds are nice! I have a couple thoughts, the iris/pupil portion of the eyes look just a tad too large to me. Also, and it may be your photos, but the highlights on the flesh tones look like they could use a tad more blending. Other than that, keep up the good work!

Jay H.

 

[user 5827]

Nice one Marc, great job...

 

[Kisifer]

Beautiful work Mark. You really did great on this beauty.

Xenofon

 

[megroot]

Thanks to all for the input. Reworked the pictures in PS again. Looks much better now, but not 70 %.
Gonna look again at the eyes.

Marc

 

[pipetrepid]

marc, very nice work as always!

 

[megroot]

thanks William.

Marc

 

[sarouman]

Hello Marc
My friend gave this to change your paint job.
I liked it very much and metal parts are incredibly!!!!

Alexandros

 

[megroot]

Thanks Alexandros.

marc

 

[tonydawe]

Hi Marc,

I'd agree totally with Jay's comments. Keep up the good work mate.

 

[jimias]

nice reds Marc !!!good job!!.keep up
Dimitris

Agreed. Bravo Marc.

 

[Chris K]

Hi marc,

I think its really nice mate I also know its quite a small bust,i like the way you have captured the look of a spartan of more senior years

Nice one

Chris

 

[megroot]

Tony, Dimitrios and Chris,

Thanks for looking and taken the time to make a comment.