Completed Critique Fallschirmjäger 1942

[Willem]

Your comments are appreciated.

Willem

 

[Willem]

Rest of the pics . . .

 

[billyturnip]

Hello Willem, very good, especially the weathering of the helmet, it looks very realistic.

Roger.

 

[tonydawe]

Hi Willem,

Very nice painting mate. The intense blue colour of the eyes does look a bit unnatural to me, but I'm sure that's an effect of the flash you used to photograph the bust.

Could I suggest you add a small drop of red into the inside corner of the eyes!!

 

[1969]

Willem nice job on this bust and the helmet is very nicely done, i think with him having the very bonde eyebrows makes the blue of the eyes pop out more, Tony`s suggestion of adding a bit of red to the corners will work nicely to add mor elife to the eyes.

Steve

 

[housecarl]

Superb splinter cam, I also think the eyes too blue. Other than that nicely done.
Carl.

 

[Willem]

Roger, Tony, Steve and Carl - Thank you for your feedback/comments, it is appreciated.

Willem

 

[rheath]

Very nicely done mate, I like it a lot, can't fault you here.

 

[megroot]

Willem,
Very nice work. I prefer that you tone down the white of the eyes. Suggestions are done.
I like your paintwork but it there is not so much shading and highlighting.
It looks so flat, there's no depth in the figure.
But you are on the right track for painting figures

Marc