Colin, I have to disagree with you on this one...
The overall attitude on the 2nd version is much better I think... look at the side by side pic... the 2nd has the head cocked and chin up... big attitude! Very F.U.!!!! The facial features are also more defined on this one as well. And also, to me, the hand holding the hat is better positioned than the first one.
The tiny details... I can't speak to the accuracy of all the tiny details, so I won't nitpick. May I also suggest that you don't nitpick either. I looks fantastic!!! I know as the sculptor/painter, you see every little thing BUT you gotta resist the urge... self scrutiny is what happened to the last Lannes.
Colin