ATA girl "redo"

[pokrad]

Some more fixes and cleanups, that's it, it won't be better than this:

 

[NRG]

Love it! All we need now is for a manufacturer to produce it (resin in preference to printing)! I would certainly buy it.

 

[pokrad]

I could not live with this one

So I decided to fix what I learned from last two busts, and spent whole day in changing the face.
Maybe it is not much better, and that smile is still creepy, but at least it is more anatomically correct:

 

[Warren SMITH]

Amazing work... Looking forward to seeing more.

 

[JackG]

I think the anatomy or drawing underneath if you will, is quite good. It seems the software is falling a bit short in some areas in terms of colour. Speaking from experience in dealing with painting portraits so hope you don't mind my colouring over your work. Just a little touch up here and there along with feathering in some lighter tones. Of special note

- teeth don't look good outlined in dark tone, also add a bit more shadow in the corners of the mouth
- refine the eyebrows to give the impression of hair
- keep the highlights/reflection of the eyes on the same sides, that is light source is from one side only
- use thinner lines to create the fold above the eye

 

[Oda]

Very good indeed!Always a great experience watching not one but two people who obviously know their business,doing what they know best!

Oda.

 

[Nap]

Very good indeed!Always a great experience watching not one but two people who obviously know their business,doing what they know best!

Oda.

Absolutely agree there

Nap

 

[pokrad]

- keep the highlights/reflection of the eyes on the same sides, that is light source is from one side only

Well, You certainly have an eye
Did not even realize that

 

[Rob]

The colourised renders always look "wrong" to me, a lot of STL sellers use them but I think you get a better idea of the sculpt from the grey.
Given where digital art is these days I am sure it would be possible to fully "paint" a figure render perfectly, almost certainly better than the vast majority of figure painters would make it look as a figure.

 

[pokrad]

It could be painted almost realistic using real textures from real people.
But I use it only to get a feeling of color...

Anyway here is the gray version:

 

[Rob]

Printed version alongside the WASP girl from the earlier thread.

 

[Nap]

Get those brushes going Rob ...nice to see the ladies being recognised

Have fun

Nap

 

[Rob]

Get those brushes going Rob

Yes boss, on it now boss.

 

[Nap]

Yes boss, on it now boss.

Nap

 

[pokrad]

I have published this bust on CGTrader for 10$.
If this works, I will publish the rest of girls there...

So please support poor (bad) sculptor

 

[Rob]

Hope she does well for you, she is a lovely piece to paint.
I look forward to seeing the Wireless Operator completed and for sale in the future.

 

[pokrad]

Did I forget to put the link ?
https://www.cgtrader.com/3d-print-models/miniatures/figurines/spitfire-girl-ata-girl-bust

 

[pokrad]

Sorry to the admins, I really do not remember if I did put the link, or it was removed...
If I am breaking some rule, feel free to delete it

 

[Nap]

Sorry to the admins, I really do not remember if I did put the link, or it was removed...
If I am breaking some rule, feel free to delete it

Not a problem whatsoever

Look forward to seeing more from you

Nap